Okay, first of all, I have to tell you, that as a character I loathe Mike.
But so far, despite that, you have me enthralled. Your opening paragraph was beautifully invoked, very atmospheric, and I was fascinated by the angels and their world. I might even have to revise my opinion on Mike.
And I loved all the little touches of humour - the travel advantages of being an angel, poor Celeste working overtime to ensure Marie survived to the end of her first day and Perry changing his mind on getting Megan back to name just a few.
And how nice to see Jimmy - I always enjoy his rare appearances in fanfic; he's sadly under-used. Sorry, Tank.
I'm eager to see where you're taking us with this one, Richard, but it's still early in the morning for me, so I'm not going to be much help on suggestions either. I'll no doubt ponder this one over the day though and will come back if anything occurs to me.
LabRat
