Aww, I always liked Mike!
And I'm really enjoying this story.
Being an angel has an advantage in travel: you're already everywhere so wherever you want to go, you've already arrived.
This is great! Where do I sign up?
Uh, typo:
He looked embarrassed, "some angels do become so fond of being human that they are almost addicted to it. Others of us can stop any time we please."
Gee, I don't know anything like that... :rolleyes:
I really like the wing-tip bending thing -- nice touch!
LOL! Great phrasing!
I could absolutely see Marie's blithe walk to the Planet, with Celeste's... interventions.
She'd actually been trying to move there without walking for several seconds before she'd remembered she now had to walk.
she discovered a real affection for french fries.
Aha! I knew it! A temptation even an angel can't resist!
I have only one suggestion: WRITE MORE! SOON! please...?
