Well, I'm not a Mike fan either
, but I was very intrigued by the start to this story, Richard. I'm afraid I don't have any wonderful ideas to give you - my muse is permanently asleep, which is probably one of many reasons why I'm not an author.
But I do hope you will be able to continue it. I really liked the humorous bits that LabRat mentioned, and I thought some of your ideas about what angels did were just fascinating. I would love to read more.
KathyM
