I too loathed Mike, just as Labby said, he was a plot device that was just annoying,(mind you after saying that i have to admit to having used him in one of my own fics, he was there after all<g>)
But again as Labby said, the beginning had me totally enthralled and I was fully involved in the story right up to the end. I love that way that you have the Marie character spitting out such earthy bits of wisdom.. that are so true.. now she needs to be there to do some research for LnC when Jimmy is not avail as he is off listening to her advice(fortuitous for her eh? <G>)and then, now that LnC know her... I don't know, Jimmy could have his watch still for summoning Superman...his story could pan out and that is how he gets into trouble. Lois could have another lead on the same story... and that is how she could get into trouble... ending up with Jimmy writting the story with LnC at the end, Perry having to accept it as fait accompli... or I don't know, just get your butt in gear and get writing... I want to know where you are going to take us with this.!
