
More FDK!
LMA: Hi Laura

Really enjoyed Mason coming into the story--Lois is normally at her 'best' when she is all worked up about Mason, and definitely she was here. I loved how Clark loved that she was jealous--and the fact that he picked up on it right away.
Sometimes one needs motivation to kickstart them into action. Mayson is that motivation for Lois.
The parts where Lois was snippy with Mason and Clark was giving her a look/a warning glare/where Lois called her Ms. Snake...the back and forths between Lois and Clark there were really classic. It came across as so authentically 'them'--I could just picture these moments unfolding

They don't realize that they're already acting like a couple, do they?

Bobby was written so 'Bobby'--wow, you really captured him

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Thank you.
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And way to go, Bobby, telling Clark how obvious it is that Clark is in love with Lois. Clark being so surprised that Bobby had figured his feelings out was

. Come on Clark, we all know how much you've always loved Lois, too

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I think it was in the Phoenix, when Clark asked Lois out that Bobby mentioned something about "about time".
Looking forward to seeing how you wrap everything up--should be a blast!
Yes.

Yes, it will be. /rubs hands with glee/
Gosh. Oh, golly. Gee, thanks, Laura. I'm glad you're enjoying it.