I've been busy and didn't even see this story. I read the first one and really liked it. I love short vignettes that can just brighten a busy day.
I would love to see how he reacts when he finds out he's Superman's son. Although, I'm surprised he managed to be as old as he is and not figure it out. I think you should finish this story. One minor criticism, there were a few spelling problems.
~Kristen
Joey: If he doesn't like you, then this is all just a moo point. Rachel: A moo point? Joey: Yeah, it's like a cow's opinion, you know, it just doesn't matter. It's "moo." Rachel: Have I been living with him for too long, or did that all just make sense?
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