Nah, I wouldn't go reading too much about the quality of the story into a lack of fdk, Lara. The reasons why no one's gotten around to reading/commenting on a story are usually legion. And most of them probably have zip to do with the story.
For myself, I do still have the time, now and then, to check out the odd vignette, but I haven't had the chance to read anything in fanfic for days now. I can't imagine I'm the only one.
I certainly wouldn't question your writing talent. I know I haven't had the chance to read much from you, but the story I did read was excellently written. I'm expecting more submissions from you soon, you hear? Software applications would do nothing for submission numbers.
LabRat
