Hi Lara! No, your story isn't 'that bad' or any kind of bad. As LabRat said, there are a zillion reasons people don't review, even if they read and enjoy. Please don't let a slow review day discourage you from writing.
Some comments:
Second person is hard to pull off in fanfic, I think, but you did it. It gives the story a nice conversational tone that I really like.
I'm exactly who and how I should be, I just didn't know that at the time.
I really like this sentiment. It's a hard conclusion for any teen to reach, and for this one it must be that much harder.
And this, just following, did a great job of lightening the moment:
So, to recap, I can shoot laser beams from my eyes and that's normal. Yep. Absolutely, 100% normal.
I liked the scene with Lois and Clark and the disconnect between how he thought they should be reacting versus how they
were reacting. You can really feel the kid's confusion and frustration, and I'm looking forward to hearing about the revelation from his point of view.
I did have a few nitpicks of the grammar and spelling variety that I'd be happy to send you privately if you're interested. They were few and far between, however, and overall, I think you have a delightful story here.
Keep writing!
Caroline
