I think it's a good idea to try a rewrite. I mean, it didn't start out the way I hoped, but it does have potential. And with a bit of practice, imagination and work (as well as some pestering of readers), I'm sure you can make it into something special.
I'm definitely going to read your second work. And your rewrite of your first piece. Just post it in a new thread to make sure it will be noticed.
Oh, and one last thought: Pick the episodes you want to work with carefully. I don't think that every single one of them can be changed to contain children.
