Don't discriminate blackbread! I don't really know why the rest of the world seems to prefer white bread. You must come to Germany and enter the first available bakery! You'll be addicted! Okay, I'm joking. Your way of writing was a bit different from the common way. That's not necessarily bad.
Yes, you would. And, oh, how I wish that bread was available in the US. (They say it is, but it absolutely is not the same. It’s just not as good.)
Remember when you do your script rewrites that you don’t have to do the whole script. You can concentrate on one area. All you have to do is tell us what show it’s from and give us a brief reminder of what is going on.
Oh, and one last thought: Pick the episodes you want to work with carefully. I don't think that every single one of them can be changed to contain children.
Exactly. And when you put the kids in, make it mean something. Have them be at least partly integral to what’s going on.
