Oooh! Pam!
<DJ tries to recover from waffy pool on the floor>
That was a lovely episode rewrite. Seriously, wonderful. Mmmmm! And everyone's mentioned it already, but I loved those verb tenses too. How nice that she lov'ed' Superman but she loves Clark. <g>
I hope I remembered to comment on this story in the DVD thread last spring - if I didn't, I apologize. I was still sort of a newbie.

But I did read it way back then, and I just re-read it now... and loved it both times. <g>
-- DJ