When I first started writing I had no idea what POV even meant, something that is all too evident in my first story. So now I'm *very* aware of it.
To add a bit of variety, another way of getting at both the main characters' thoughts in the same scene is to write the scene from a third person's POV . I'm thinking of Anna B's "What a Fish Knows" which got quite a lot across about what was going on in Lois and Clark's minds. In more serious stories, a secondary character like Martha or Perry could be used in a scene. Or .... a whole L & C story from Henderson's POV! <g>
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