Oh, Wendy, you truly know how to toy with my emotions. The second half of this chapter in particular carried a punch. I am teary as I write this.
This has been a really excellently executed piece. I love how raw and honest Lois was when she came to Clark, saying the things that needed to be said. They have things left to hash out, but, oh, you two, there's hope for you yet.
As a fan, it hurts me to see them both isolated from one another and hurting, but you write that so well. Props to you for that.
I'm on the edge of my seat awaiting Part 4.
