Just read "The kiss off" by Erin and CC: I loved it!
I have particularly liked how this story is so "complete": starting with the basic idea of a game, you gave us a story where there are sadness, loneliness, jealousy, playfulness, passion, love. Great partnership, ladies!
You could capture Lois and Clark's feelings of sadness and disconfort with their relationship, but hinting to the very much wished happy ending!
Great!
simona
