It's horrible to say, but I am glad you killed Lana. If she had lived after that wreck there is just no way Clark would have been able to go to Lois, at least not very soon. And I was wrong before, you did tie it up quite nicely.
The whole revelation scene was lovely. You have written a grown-up Lois: she comforted him about Lana and accepted Clark's secret so well. And then...
Aaah! That line made my day.
Can we please, please have a sequel? Maybe even an nfic sequel?
We will promise to love you forever... we promise!
Thank you, DJ, for a great story.
