Ann --
I already knew that Lana was going to die, because DJ had gracefully told me, so I can't pretend to be upset.
Yes, no getting mad at me - I warned you in advance.
So, eh, what was that little stunt about? He wanted to impress her, right? He was testing her? He wanted to see if she would throw Clark away now that she had had a whiff of Superman? I mean, if he wanted her company, seeing her as Superman really wasn't a good idea.
True... but Clark *IS* a lunkhead sometimes. And after everything he'd been through, he wanted to be able to talk with her first as someone she wasn't upset with. He needed a little *lift* and he knew she'd talk to him as Superman. Plus, as you said, it was a nice little lead in to his visit to her as Clark - I took literary liberty here.
See you admit too that he's a lunkhead. Hee hee.
Her question brings him to his kness and he replies that he more or less killed Lana by choosing Lois over her.... DJ, this is heavy.
Thank you - I'll take that as a compliment.
Gotta stop here, DJ. I really, really liked the story. I, too, wouldn't mind a sequel.... (You know what I mean. )
See my answer at the bottom of this post...
Well, DJ, it could be pretty steamy and still stay in the PG folder. You know what they say about imagination... nfic would be good, too...
Again... see my answer below...
I love this...
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See as we proof our stories, we read them so many times that we eventually go cross-eyed. And I'm not just speaking from personal experience.
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I love that you do this. (I do, too.) I've said this before, but I hate trying to read a fic when the author hasn't even taken the time re-read it and it's absolutely full of misspellings and bad grammar. Yes, sometimes we do go cross-eyed proofing and will always miss some things, but you can tell when someone has taken time with their story. That means a lot to me and shows that you care.
Thanks Nancy. Yes, I do care. In fact, I usually re-read it at least once even after I post... and usually still manage to catch at least one more thing that I'd like to change and so I have to go in and edit my post.
Thanks for the feedback SNL! More?
Okay, now my response:
For those of you (Nancy, Tahu, SPark, Lisa, Ann, SNL...) who suggested there should be a sequel or more or whatever... I have written an epilogue for you. (Lisa said "we promise to love you forever" - how could I refuse?)
Last night my husband had a few guy friends over and they watched football. I hung out in my bedroom of sanctuary, watched a good movie, and wrote an epilogue.
I wish it was done - I really wanted to post it this morning as the final, final edition to the Breakfast Club - but it's not done quite yet - close (and then I as told Nancy, there will be all those read throughs and corrections to make).
Anyway, it's 7 pages so far
and all WAFF. However, it can't be posted on the PG boards. So you'll have to look for it in the nfic. I hope to have it posted at least before bedtime tonight. Hubby's going to be gone tonight so that should allow me to finish it.
Love you all for your wonderful comments and naggings for a follow-up... the squeaky wheel gets the grease remember...
Thanks!!!
