Oh, goody, I get to be first. I don't have time for lots of feedback, but this was an absolutely beautiful part.
And it just begs for a steamy sequel....
I drop my hand down to her back and stroke it lightly. Her body shivers slightly at the contact.
Please?
I interrupt her by pressing my lips to hers. I’ve wanted to do this for a long time. I part her lips with my tongue and discover her thoroughly and intimately for the first time. Her body, rigid at first, soon softens and relaxes into my arms. I pull her body to me tighter and hold her, never wanting to let go. I drink in the softness of her lips and delight in the urgency of her tender draws against my mouth.