DJ, I read the sequel.
(couldn't find a steamy emoticon /me pours ice water over head)
It's where it belongs, and it's a very logical extension to this story. And now I'm SO looking forward to the sequel! If it'll help, I can send one of my muses over to consult with your muse - wait, no, bad idea, that'll just produce lots of controversial feedback!
Anyway, please take all the time you need to do your story justice.
Is it posted yet?
