Oooh! The comments keep coming! Thank you everyone!
Lisa --
I agree that Mr. Imaboyscouthavetodotherightthing might not have left her as easily after the accident, if she had been okay. The guilt would have gotten to him.
And I was wrong before, you did tie it up quite nicely.
Oh WOW! Thank you Lisa!
Can we please, please have a sequel? Maybe even an nfic sequel? We will promise to love you forever... we promise!
Eeeeh hee hee! Okay, since there are so many of you out there clammering for this... no promises... and only if I can come up with something believeable and not "smut for smut's sake". I'll think on it and see what I can come up with.
Jen --
I should have had more faith.
Yes, have a little faith...
Thanks Jen!
Maria --
Thank you for the fdk and for following the story - I was glad to have you along for the ride!
Framework4 --
Now could you have them elope? Quick before anything can go wrong?
Ha ha!
mmprincess --
But hey, I'm just a reader not a writer.
Yes, but sometimes that can be a good thing. You readers out there catch so many boo-boos that the writers may not catch. See as we proof our stories, we read them so many times that we eventually go cross-eyed. And I'm not just speaking from personal experience. One of the writers I beta for tells me all the time that she's "looked at a part so many times that she's just sick of it".
So we can miss things.
That's the great thing about these boards. We can post our stuff here and you guys get to take a look at it and tell us what we can improve on. That makes us better writers.
So thank you for that. I'll definitely give that part a second look before posting the story to the archive.
I'm glad you liked the story though and appreciate your fdk.
Thanks so much everyone!!! You made my evening!
