Hi, Beethoven!
You the new author on the block? Welcome!
I noticed you posted a story. Sorry, I didn't read it yet,

but I did take a *very* quick peek and skim through the FDK. I like the idea of Lois and Clark with kids, and I like the idea of episode rewrites with kids in them.
I hope you don't feel picked on here; you know any author worth his/her salt must suffer for their craft.
I've noticed a lot of new authors for TV Show fanfic choose to write in script form. It seems logical, since shows do have scripts, but the thing to remember is that scripts are made to be performed, not read like stories are. (English classes do have readings of scripts of famous plays, but that is for other, long and boring reasons

). Basically, the story form just looks nicer, that's all.
If you want practice, easy writing, etc., please feel free to check out the Challenge section of the message board! Oh, please do; I do so love fresh meat---I mean talent.
Writing is fun, yes. But good writing can also be work.
Fortunately, if you love it and you're willing to fall flat on your face a few times, you'll find it's not so bad, and you'll get better and better reviews as time goes on.
Just remember, the FoLCs here are your friends, and we're not out to get you. Please listen carefully to everyone's comments, and bear in mind we're just trying to help, not insult you.
Hope to see more from you soon, and now I *will* read that story!
