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Thank you!
That was great on so many levels! I loved it...
In my heart of hearts I knew that they wouldn't be allowed to remember, but there was a little niggle hanging around in the back of my head that said that somehow, Lois would have to try to find a way to change Utopia. Turns out she didn't need to do anything, the people of Utopia did it all by themselves. Change from the inside. It's beautiful.
There's two things about your writing that get me everytime:
One - why hasn't anyone done this, in this way, before? It's so simple, yet so originial all at the same time.
Two - If I could write this is what I would write.
And that is why I love it so much.
Thank you again
Helga