Just caught up on the last two parts and... fantastic. <Oh, happy, happy sigh!> Everything tied up wonderfully well. What a rollercoaster ride, though, from the waffy start to part 17, to the various reactions from Madge, Elise and Co to Lois and Clark... Petal and Silas (and I love Silas, by the way) and... Well, you get the picture.
I don't, as a general rule, like the soul mates thing. However, at least you made a good use of it in this story, so I'll forgive you for mentioning it.
I do, however, wonder about the whole not-being-able-to-track-Lois-and-Clark-in-the-present-because-their-souls-are-already-there thing. How can they be tracked in the past, when there are previous incarnations of their souls? Or can they not be tracked whenever there are living incarnations?
I know, I know. I'm worrying about this way too much.
Just one other thing...
Saw his worry for their ancestors mirrored in her eyes
Uh, aren't they Lois and Clark's
descendants?
Anyway... this has been a wonderful ride. Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
Chris
