I like the changes. They seem to work pretty well, especially the smoochies part. I did find a couple of typos.

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She had been there in the background when Lois and broken up with Superman.
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And that could be why Lois had his parents had all been so surprised when he had acted so meanly when he had first walked in.

-- Roger

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