I'm with those guys - no need! And what Wendy said. <G> I read Tank's comment as that he was complimenting you on something a little original.

After all there are no rules with this kind of thing and diversity makes the fanfic world go round.

Wouldn't say no to a sequel, naturally, but only if you wanted to do one and it appealed. I absolutely don't think it's a requrement or that you need change anything to make the story work 'better'. It's just fine as it is. smile

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Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly.
Aramis: Yes, sorry.
Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.

The Musketeers